Monday, March 16, 2009

Feedback Requested-Character 1

This is the first of four characters that I would like to get some feedback. They are not long descriptions so they only take a few minutes to read.

Thanks. :)

Her name is Venus, hero name Vine, and nickname Mother Nature. She can control and grow plant life. Her skin has a faint but distinct green tint to it, eyes the color of tree bark, rustic red hair that resembles tangled vines, slender body, and bare footed with toes that look like tree roots. Venus wears a long, flowing, loose green dress with knee length, skin tight brown leggings. She barely speaks above a whisper, and she rarely smiles in the presence of others. Venus shares these qualities and her good nature (no pun intended) with her partner Leo-The Predator.

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